Well, I have finished the 3rd chapter. But (yes, a but, sorry!) I am going to repost the story on here once my beta and I are done! :) Yay betas!!! My beta is awesome!!! Lol!

Leigh

Chapt. 2

"I wonder where Lily is," thought Amy out loud.

"I don't know. Maybe she's still in the Heads' compartment, I'll go check," replied James, getting up and walking out of the compartment.

As soon as the door closed and James's footsteps had died away, everyone bursted out laughing.

"Oooh, imagine how mad Lils will be that we sent him!" Leigh exclaimed between laughs.

"I never thought about that! Evans'll probably kill him!" Sirius said, walking out of the door after James.

Once again, everyone in the compartment was laughing to hard to talk.

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James had checked the Heads' compartment and found she wasn't there. He was walking back when he saw.......

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The dark figure grabbed Lily. She immediatly recognized the cloak as one the Death Eaters wore. She gasped. She tried to scream, but he had silenced her. The Death Eater knocked her out with a curse she didn't know. He heard footsteps.

Damn it! he thought The Dark Lord is going to be angry. He quickly did a memory charm so she would forget she was attacked and left her.

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Lily lay on the ground unconscious. She was so pale. James felt for a pulse and wa relieved when he felt one.

"Geez Potter, I thought Evans would bbe the one to kill you, not the other way around!" a voice exclaimed.

"You scared me Padfoot!"

"So! How is that a reason to kill Evans, Prongs? Besides, she was dead when I walked up!" Sirius joked.

"Padfoot, be serious! I don't know what happened! She wasn't in the compartment, I was walking back and...." James's voice trailed off.

"I am Sirius! Sirius is my middle name! Well, no, actually, it's my -"

"Sirius, shut up! The joke is so old! Even your fan club is tired of it, and that's saying something! Now help me get Evans back to the compartment."

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James stroked Lily's hair. He wished she could be conscious and do this without her blowing up at him. He came back to reality and noticed her eyes were opening.

"Lily," James said quietly.

She jumped.

"Who the bloody hell are you?!"

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Ok, so that's the end for right now. Tell me what you think!

Just got my letter from mugglenet. My submission has been rejected.Oh well, I can fix it easily because they said their were some typos and incorrect punctuating around the dialouge. Very easily fixed! I should have it resubmitted in no time! Although, I might find a beta...I don't know. Wish me luck!!!!!!

<3 Ya!

Leigh

Yay! I'll post 2nd chapter soon, maybe today!!!!

<3 Ya!

Leigh

"Do you know who's Head Girl, Prongs?" Remus asked

"Isn't that obvious?" James replied, opening the compartment door and spotting a girl with red hair, "Evans."

"Potter! This compartment is only for the prefects and Heads!"

"That's why I'm allowed in here."

"You're replacing Remus for a prefect? Dumbledore must be going senile."

"Ummmm.... no."

"Then why are you-" she cut herself off when she saw a badge identicle to hers on him."Give that back to Remus!" she said, but knew it was James's because she saw the name on the badge.

"Lily, it's not mine, it's really his," Remus joined the conversation.

"Oh God! You mean he's really Head Boy?! I have to share a common room and dorm with him??? Oh no......." her voice trailed off.

"I'm not that bad Evans," James said grinning.

If anything, this just made Lily even more frustrated.

"Prefect meeting," James reminded her

"Oh, right."

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"Anything you want to add Potter?"

"No, I think you covered it all."

"Then you are dissmissed."

Lily quickly picked up her books and left to go find her friends. James and Remus left to go to the Marauders' compartment, which had quite an interesting history.

~Flashback~

A haughty little group of first years, which James knew would be sorted into Slytherin, walked up to the third year Marauders.

"Potter, your in our way!"

"Bug off, midgets!" Sirius said to them.

"Blood traitor!" the boy spat back.

"I don't see your name on the compartment," James said.

"I don't see your either, so move!"

'God, this boy is a pain in the ass' James thought.

Sirius turned around and muttered an incantation. 'The Marauders' Compartment' was now painted on the door.

"I see our name now, so bug off!"

~End Flashback~

Remus and James walked into the compartment that, still, had 'The Marauders' Caompartment' on it. James was surprised to see Leigh, Amy, and Tiffany in there too. 'Oh no,' James thought, "anotther one of Sirius's plans...........'

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Lily checked every compartment except for one. 'Oh no,' she thought, "no, no, no, no, no..........."

She turned around to walk back towards the Head compartment, but that was cut short.

" I don't think so," said a shadow from the dark.

Hahahaha, cliffie, tell me what you think!!!!

ok, well, i don't have my story right here w/ me, but i'll update soon, I'm getting really bored of not writing in this xanga. I have a real one, but, it's secret. no, actually, my HP xangas are the secret ones............ shhhhhhhh!

Well, I'll update this one ASAP!

Lots of love,

Leigh

Ok, about to update!!!!!!!!

Lots of Love,

Leigh